Everlasting-Elements's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'll be Real with u]

Good try.

Basically, your bass was too strong at the beginning. It just over powered the background vox. This song remind me of the one song that goes like 'We like the poody tat" or whatever. Hopefully, you know know what I'm talking about.
It didn't really keep my attention, though. It sounded pretty neat, but it wasn't anything major. Like... It was just an intro to me. Not really sure... Perhaps you should make it longer and put better melodies in.
It was just super plain, man. Like... I dunno. I liked the beat, though. It was pretty fuckin' dope.
Hit me back, if you want.

DJ-Izeales responds:

if you could spare me sum good headphone i may have known it was too bassy, its jus my headphones are really pathetic, the intro may b a bit crap but i was anxious for sum feedback, that whys its pretty short. thanks for the feedback btw and i'll continue with it since i only made it a cple days ago =) i think as a pose to it starting bassy i lead to it becoming bassy.

[Bomber109 - FastTech]

Hmm

Sounds pretty basic. But hey, whatever...
Let me give it a quick listen, then I'll relisten to it for you review.
I like that bass at the intro, but I don't like the celestial that you used, because it sounds like a straight up preset. You should toy around with the X and Y thingy, of course this is just assuming that you're using FL... Maybe I'm wrong?
I don't like the part at :30. It just... It jumps so suddenly without warning or any transition what so ever.
It's just... you have a good start, but that's all it is. A start. You need some build in here and maybe some better beat sounds, because it doesn't sound like you have much of a beat in the song. The beat is the spine, brah.
Keep it coming though. You'll get better.
Hit me back, if you want.

Bomber109 responds:

Thanks. I basically agree with everything you said, and yes I do have FL.

I'll try toying around with the preset.

[Nav - Zdarkness]

I don't know much about DnB

I'll have to say, the slow style of it caught me off guard. I've only listened to paragon type dnb. I'm used to that... fast stuff, you know?
Now, this is not to say that this track is bad, because it's not. However it didn't keep my attention at all times, but then again... I'm doing like 5 things at once right now. Guess nothing really has my attention.
I'm kind of wierd when it comes to music. I love bases that make my head bob till it's about to fall off. Unfortunately this song did not do that. But that's alright.
Now that I've given it a minute, I kinda like it.
I don't really like the one sound that comes in at like 420 or so. The ending was odd, but I liked how it faded out. Sounded neat.
I like the intro with the kick... jeeze this is like a review by someone with ADD. I jump around so much... Hmm... The song is alright. It's nothing to be all dancey about, I guess that is the word I want to use. It's still good though.
4/5
Review me if you'd like.

Nav responds:

Thanks for the review! Sound at 4:20? I didn't introduce anything new here....

This isn't dnb, it's breaks, which is much more "Danceable" than dnb because of its slower tempo. Bah, NG needs a "misc electronic" section with a user-definable genre.

[[TMM43] Heaven]

Very neat.

I like the song. It has a very uplifting feel to it. It's keeping me entertained and sounds very good on my computer, even without my headphones (Headphones make bass sound amazing)
I just put in my headphones cuz my little brother is busy FC'ing shit on medium for me. It sounds so crisp in my headphones. They're Koss Ur/29 by the way. I dunno. Not much room for improvement, too be honest. It sounds really good. It doesn't make my head bob, though. Not sure if that's good, or bad though. I guess I would have liked more of a clinch somehow, but to be honest, the audio sounds so good, that I don't know how you could have done so. Perhaps it's just me.... I'm sorry.
I do like it though.
5/5
Drop me a review if you'd like.

[DKC2 - Symphony of Thorns]

Talk about loud...

You really need to turn the volume down on them insturments, cuz I listen to my music super loud and those insturments are ringing loud in my head.
The song just reminded me of the game. Not much diversity from the old game. However, I'll give you the beat. The beat was very nice. More poppy than laid back and chill under intense pressure, beat, you know?
I like the whole classical feel for this song. But I bet if you threw your thoughts into this song, you could make something so intesne, I bet. Make a new beat. Change up some notes. To weird effects. Make it fun.
Come review me.

Thomas responds:

You oughtta make a habit of listening to music quiet,or not super loud anyway.

[=[O]= Dry (Instrumental)]

Hmm... smooth.

Reminds me of alien shit. The little piano or whatever that is, reminds me of the x-files theme. I like it man. I wouldn't mind hearing some lyrics to go with this, dude.
Pros
-Smooth beat. Flows so good.
-Good insturment choices
-Good use of your FX

Cons
-Extremely repetitve. I understand it's hip hop and all, but without lyrics, it kinda gets old.

[(DJ-B) Decent FINAL]

Smooth

Wow... didn't see this coming, you know?
I like the intro. It's very chill. I don't like your choice of snare, though. I like the digi thing or whatever that is. Sounds nice for a backup lead. That's a nice arp. I think your beat should have a little more power in it, though. Make them louder, or add more sounds to increase the force.
Nice little break down measure too. I like that pad, it's used nice. You did really well with your automation clips, man. The song is nice.
Pros
-Nice choice of insturments
-One of the smoothest songs I've heard from you
-Good song in general nice use of your resources.

Cons
-The beat lacks power, and the beat is the spine, so the song has lost quite a bit of movement.
-The song is far too short.
-The ending FX is shit. Remove it completely.

DJ-B responds:

Thanks for the review man!!!! I know the ending was a little rough but I ran out of ideas so I just said whatever and posted it.

DJ-B

['08 Trance Demo]

Trance... not my forte.

That sample sucks, lol... I like the intro. The cymbal sounds nice and I like that bass. That little arp or whatever sounds nice, but sometimes it makes my ears ring and I have it on about half volume right now. I really like the tune, though.
Your percussion is very unique. I haven't heard things like that before.
The songs sounds amazing when you use the drums around 120. Sounds extremely chill and relaxing, man.
You already know what you need to improve on, I think...
5/5
Come review me, if you want.

[Rising Revolt (WIP)]

Returning the favorite

I'm not much of a trance person, so, I dunno.
I don't normally like Trance, because I dunno how to make it and I'm mostly jealous of those who can. I really wanna make GOA someday.
Anyways, I like the beat for the song and the synths are pretty smooth as well. Probably the only the I don't like are them vox cuz they just sound really dumb.
It's a cool song, I like the little arp before the whole stupid vox thing, though.
Thanks for reviewing my song, here is the favor returned.

[=[O]= Hydro [GOA]]

Hey bitch =]

I miss you man! I haven't talked to you in forever, but I guess your phone is disconnected, huh?
Anyways, I really like the bass, it sounds really cool to me, man. I always wanted to try goa, I dunno if you ever remember me talking about doing, but I guess you can show me how to do it someday, huh?
No major problems, but the arp gets annoying after the 50th time hearing it =]

0con responds:

Hey man sorry I haven't talked to you in a while bro, my phone is disconnected right now though so yeah =(

Anyway thanks for the review man! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked the song! I really liked the arp a lot because of all the depth it put into the song and it just sounded awesome because it kinda fades in with the rest of the music to the point that it is barely noticeable. Idk, I like it =)

Take it easy dude.

Peace,
Alyk O'Connor