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Catchy.

Originality sounded pretty good. Sounded like a nice touch of the oriental sounds, really.
It's very diverse. I don't hear to much techno like this man. I usually hear basic things.
Your beat was okay, but quickly got annoying and just kinda made me mad, to the point where I couldn't focus on your melody.
Your reverse crash was a bit messed up, and it's noticable if you listen carefully. It's off by about a fourth of a measure.
Not really that much to it man...
It's alright I guess.
5/5
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XMalick responds:

Thanks for listening. I really apologize for the years late response. haha.

Neat

Hey man, whats up!?
Anyways, it sounds pretty cool. The intro sounds good and all. Just flows pretty nice, but the guitar doesn't sound so hot in this peice. I think maybe another arp would better suit this song. It's really good actually.

5/5
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Do you still go to the sk8 crew? I thought I saw you in there, a while back.

zerofalse responds:

heyy thanks for the review
i knew that the guitar might be one of the downfalls in the song.but thanks for letting me know. i guess techno with guitar riffs doesnt so good lol. ill check out some of your stuff too no prob i use to talk in the sk8 crew forums, but not anymore for some reason. i still skate alot though
thx for your review

Okay.

The song was good until the guitar FIRST came in. It confused me, and it just, sounded weird. This sounds better calm, but I also think you used loops for you project, so there wasn't much you could really do to add variation, right? What program did you use, like..acid or something? Sounds ambient, because I don't think I've heard industrial like this before. It's not too bad, for messing around, but it could be better.
3/5
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Wow.

The guitar just, does a great job in this, which is why you scored a 5, but your beat just flat out, sucks! I mean, it just didn't flow with the guitar at all. It just hurt my head dude. There isn't much to say, but there you go.
3/5
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Okay

The song was pretty good, but it could have been A LOT BETTER. Your snares were so...boring, really. They need some...pizaz, edit to your taste. The instrument that was used for Catherine, or whatever her name was, was not a good pick in my opinion. I would have chosen a higher like instrument. This one a a deep effect to it, and when it went high, it just didn't have a good sound. The little arp was kinda, too repetitive.
However, you did the song, so you got some major points there. It doesn't sound you missed notes anywhere, which is a good way to be tops, like me, lol, just kidding. The male voice, was good though.
4/5
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DJ-B responds:

Sorry I have not responded I am behind on my reviews. Thanks for the review man.

Pretty cool.

It sounds really good. Good melody, and fx. The only real problem I found, your FX made this loud screech noise, and my head was about to explode. That just didn't help the song at all. That was honestly, the only problem with the song man. Keep making music for us.

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5/5
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snayk responds:

Haha, yeah that sound effect was altered to purposely sound like that. I was keeping true to the industrial genre :D

Thanks a lot for the review + vote. Will gladly look through your stuff.

Cool man.

It has nice touches to it. The melody is bad ass, very tripped out in some cases. The background FX made this sound really good man. I just don't like that it is so repetetive. It needs more variation. Perhaps you could loop this and make it shorter?
Come check my audio out man.

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4/5

Damn

CONS
The song sounds like it a has a heavy kick and bass. With my headphones it distorts the sound and cuts it all out except fuzz. It's very repetitive through the song, and it's too short, I would have liked more variation in this piece.

PROS
The melody does a dramatic feel on my emotions and makes me feel confused about sadness. The beat sounds pretty solid except your hi hat. It seems so flimsy. You should make it on like, C4 or something, because it sounds so high, and it just doesn't feel like a mix to me with your deep beat. I like the violin or whatever, it sounds nice the the rimshot snare. I think that's what that is. It has a good ending, too.

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DJ-B responds:

Thank You for the review man. The distotion was just from crappy mastering. I plan to fix that in a remix. Thanks again.

The...well

This song just seems all over the place. The song has beats, which is cool, but your drum loop in the beggining started then stopped, then started again and that just doesn't sounds very good at all. The transition, changing, doesn't sound very good either. It got my head moving towards the end. It's not a bad song, it's just not good.
3/5
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BritZombie responds:

Yeah, I could've improved on that one. I'll check out your stuff soon.

Cheera

Techno?

This doesn't sound like techno to me man. The song is pretty awesome, however, it is not techno. It sounds like some random beats placed together. You have good beats here, but some of the insturments are far too loud and some of the others get annoying. Like that cowbell, it drives me on a killing spree.
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There's my link.
3/5
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