Very cool my friend!
I want this song to be tops. It beats Farenheit entirely! I with the Hi-Hats were an octave down. I think that would suit the more 'evil' on this. Too be honest, I can't really find anything else wrong with this song. Melodies are great man!
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
"It beats Farenheit entirely!" You mean celsius?
I'm the only one who liked celsius more i guess ^.^ I like happier songs more hi hats an octive down? Thats crazy talkin'! But i suppose it could have worked, cept i donno if theyd flow as well together.
CFL?
Kinda sounds like Crying for Love, doesn't it?
I really like your melodies here man. They have a nice sound to them and this sounds very happy hardcore to me!
That arp is very fitting with this song and really I don't have any problems with this song.
The Hi-hats are annoying to me though. That's really all that bugs me.
Good job
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
I LOVE THAT ARP! I was going for a happy hardcore feel, but i just LOVE that melody. I feel that this song and farenheit made a great addition to my page... And it didnt hurt getting some dls for my older songs from these also XD (Go platinum ninjitsu, GO!)
Not too bad
The song sounds very well made. The melody is good. The beat is half-ways decent. And it just sounds good in particular. I, however, do not like your high hats, at all! They don't fit your hard beat. So really, you just need to change those hats, and you are good to go man!
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
kk sweet srry im not a good dnb kinda guy ill try to work on it tho
thx for the review tho
Very cool
I think the melody sounds very good and sounds nice with the arp thing in the back. The lyrics sound fairly fitting with the song. But I was looking for a more deep, rough sound to this song. I think that would better suit the song with the lyrics. That is really the main problem. It's very good.
Everlasting-Elements
5/5
Thanks for the review man, and of course, the helpful tips :)
Not too bad.
CONS
Although Trance is not my forte, I will base this review on what I think. At the begining, you intro melody didn't sound very appealing to me because it seemed cut short to me.
After the melody was done, this one being after the intro, the crash transition didn't sound all that great to me. But the melody after it had madness skills. I would have liked to see a volume change with your transitions for a better effect, but they were not there.
PROS
The melodies had a nice ring to them. The peice was a beauty. It was a good song for me to act stupid to with my little brother and the beat was very solid and gave a nice feel to the melody. The distortion, at times, sounded very good.
There is your repayment my friend.
Rev claps?
The melody sounds really good dude. The beat sounds good, but the reversed claps, i think, sound like puke. It sounds offbeat for the song or just completely out of place, and you can notice it. In some spots, it sounds very good though.
The song sounds very full and filled in. I like how it works up and all and really seems like there is no major problem.
Wait, now I found one. You have a fuzzing sound in the song, and it just completely sucks. It ruins the song.
Everlasting-Elements
Sorry about that. Its supposed to be wind =( but it doesnt I guess. Thanks!
~Yogosun
Great
I like this song dude, but that synth at the beggining had a sick sound, and then when the bass came in, it sounded a lot better. all in the headphones my man!
I like the kick rolls and then the section where it got quiet, i recognize that, but...it sounded different, which is damn cool!
The intro like spin/ scrathch thing, was really cool and added awsome zest to the song man. made it hardcore to me and so did the vox. Sounded very intune with the song man.
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
Thanks man helpful reviews are always nice. ;)
no offense
This doesn't even sound good man. The piano sounds like it is moving too fast for the beat and the piano melody just just fit what I'm looking for...
Nice
I like the song, but I don't really like that hi hat that is playing in every eighth note. I think it is just annoying really and kinda takes me to the hat rather than the beauty of the song.
When the piano comes in, I wish that could have been a bit more dramatic. It just seemed really high and just kinda took me away from the main melody of the song, I wish it could have flown in better, like quieter and maybe longer notes to make it more dramatic.
The crash in the song is kinda...odd sounding. Perhaps modding the crash and putting a different type of effect on it, would make me feel like it fit better. I think a nice echoey crash, would do the job. Just me.
The melodies sounded fine, especially that choir, I think it is, in the background, perhaps a string. It is very good though. Just those minor problems I said above.
5/5
everlasting-Elements
Hit me back if you have a chance!
Everlasting, first of all, thank you for your review. I'm glad I can add you to my network of NG music friends! Your advice is sound. Bottom line, I must improve my drum/percussion. I will have to experiment with a number of solutions, but I have a few directions and ideas to start in. Thanks again. I'll check your stuff out too.
-Ty
Lets be honest!
The way you have this set up is okay, but you need to get some new drum packs, because that hat and snare are driving me insane!
On a good note, I like the glass thing or whatever that you used for the new melody that came in, and the melody itself if overall good, but it just sucks with them shitty packs!
4/5
That vocals part sucks too!
Everlasting-Elements
Come check me out will you?
i dont get what ur talking about on the snare. thats like the standard dance snare. you may be right but i love a good distorted snare. thx for listening
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