Everlasting-Elements's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[[=Broom=]]]

cool

The song was pretty cool, although I found the build-ups to be far too long and that just kinda made me get bored with the song, I would have turned it off if you didn't make a new section come in. That was really my main problem. My build-ups suck, so I shouldn't be talking, at least you have them XD. good job none the less.
5/5
Everlasting-Elements

[`D`S`-my dreams-]

Hmm

Well, this sounds kinda like funk with disco, and I don't really like it. The song in general hurt my head and made me want to scream. The notes were cool and everything, they just didn't sound nice to me all put together. Just make the progression or whatever sound better. That is all I can say.

[Yogosun: Danger Will Come]

Good song

I like the song, no doubt, but if it was meant to be the factory style, this doesn't really get it. The song doesn't seem to have the factory style to me, I dunno about others. Good melodies, this just sounds like dark style techno to me! Good job none the less.

Jiao-Zhang responds:

ha ha, I thought it was goth! But I put it industrial cuase I did it by accident. Thanks for the review.

-yogosun

[special k]

Cool

Pros
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1) I actually like how made the repetivness flow.
2) Not bad beats
3) The voice sounded good with the vocals
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CONS
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1) The voice, the first made the song sketchy for me.
2) The song does get annoying after a minute or 2
3 That intro sucks man!

5/5
Everlasting-Elements

Check me out will you?

snayk responds:

Thanks for the awesome review.

I agree that the first voice does sound a little out of place, but when I was making the song I decided to keep it for fun.

I don't get bored with the song, but that's just me. Most people get sick of my repetition, and I don't blame them.

I like the intro :( I like weird sounds and effects, so I kept that present.

Once again, thank you for the great review. I'll check out your music sometime.

[ZX.4]

Why did you make this?

It only took you 15 minutes because all you added were loops from FL in there. If you are gonna make some audio, a loop is fine, but try to put some originality in it next time.
2/5
Everlasting-Elements

[(DJ-B) First Song]

Well

This song needs work! The beat is far too repetitive and stands out too much. Sounds like the insturments have no effects and the the drum kits sound like the original ones that are selected for you in fl!

On the plus side. This is pretty good for your first. On my old account, my first didn't even have a melodyXD.

3/5

Everlasting-Elements

DJ-B responds:

thank you for reviewing my song. I think i can agree with what you said.thanks again.

[Yogosun: Beutiful Sunset]

Good

I liked it man, but like ocon said, that Hi-hat just sucked. And it just made the whole song have a nag effect on it. Other than that, it was very well put together, and I wish I could be as good as you, but I suck, so oh well. Good job dude!

5/5

Everlasting-Elements

Jiao-Zhang responds:

lol. Dont say you suck.. why? becuase it will get people to not listen to you. Just keep practising, you'll get better. Thanks for the review!

-Yogosun

[Yogosun: Kick the bass!]

Awsome

It was awsome man. I didn't like the super long kick intro. That got old, fast. I do however enjoy that thumping bass, is that a fry bass? I like the main melody, but really your only problem was that long intro! Good job bro!

Everlasting-Elements

Jiao-Zhang responds:

lol. well, its trance. get over it =p Thanks.

-Yogosun

[Death To All]

MUTE

You need to mute this or somethung or cut that off because when it rings, it fucks everything up. The beat is really repetetive. The song is okay, and if it did not ring so damn much, I would not mind hearing this.
4/5
Everlasting-Elements

Check my music out if you got the time.

newskies responds:

Ok, I'll keep that in mind for upcoming tracks!

Anyways thx for the review!

-NewSkies

[An Everlasting Struggle]

I like it man

Real light metal. It is a good thing to hear after listening to OMERTA by LAMB OF GOD. But anyways. the panning effect was pretty good, but the drums sounded off at first, but now that I'm hearing it again, they sound fine. This is a good song, but where the fuck is the kick ass bass!? Come check me out, I make techno, but I'm still a metal head!
5/5

Everlasting-Elements

Xerxes-Sangco responds:

Haha thanks for the 5 and kick ass review! Yea the bass is in there, I just don't want it to overpower the guitars, and because I made this late at night and didn't have headphones, I had to make this with my speaker volume low and couldn't really hear much. Thanks for the feedback!