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Everlasting-Elements

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Neat.

I'm liking this intro. The beat is just catchy.
WOW, I tell you, I didn't see that coming. I didn't ever expect to see vocals.
hmm... split into bit...that, I don't like.
Not much to say man...it's just a preview, so I don't know what to say.
Did you do these vocals, or just find them?

Everlasting-Elements
4/5
Come review me.

Dr-Dajova responds:

The split is because i dont want this track to be stolen, since its undergoing a remixcontest on vipzone...

and no, i did not make these vocals, since it says "radames" at the start, witch is the original author... And i have the full version already done (this is clipped from it), but i wont release it until the contest is over, simple as that :)

Well, glad ya like it either way, i'll keep them coming ;)

Diversity

I thought the intro lasted a little too long. I think you should have put your own hardcore spices in there, if you wanted to make it that fucking long.
I don't like your insturment choice. I think there is one called 'Rave Lead' or something like that. I'll tell you what, I don't like it. It doesn't sound good in the song one bit, and that Piano is pissing me off. It's way too repetitive. I'm glad I don't play FF because I'm sure that song would piss me off.
You just need to spice up the songs you make man. It's not bad, trust me, I've reviewed worse, but it could be a lot better.
Everlasting-Elements
3/5 Average.
Come review me sometime. I'm going to make a VG remix. Maybe it could help you...

Lone-X responds:

Well the song is intended for people who did play FF7 man. U should hear the original one and compare.

Mastering much?

It doesn't have very nice quality. I hear the dudes vocals, and I can understand them, it's just...they're all weird sounding. Also, you should have left the fade out, out. That way, the song could just loop. You seem to have some tallent now man. If you need help with some stuff, hit me up, and I'll do what I can.
I just got FL again, and I work on it when I stay at my sisters house. Soon, I'm getting my own PC just for music, so, I'll be working very hard.
I just now noticed you stole my signature move. The tempo drop, eh?
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DJ-B responds:

Thanks for the review man. If I need some help I'll talk to you. thanks for the review

Hm. Let me see

If I recall, the original was quite a classical song. In this one, you made it a techno, perhaps a bit ambient. It lost a lot of touches from the original. By that, I mean, it didn't have an impact of well...a large impact. In end of the world, that was like the final world, which is quite big. The song was as big as it should be.
The little.... screechy thing is what really ruined it, to be honest. I wish you would have chose better sounds too. I think that is the main problem with the song.
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DJ-B responds:

Thanks for the review man.

Hmmm

I guess it's good man. There doesn't seem to be anything wrong with it, I'm just not feeling it, you know?
Who knows, I really don't have room to talk. I mean, it's been almost 4 months since my last audio submission. Lets collab tonight or something, if you want.
I like the little...suspence risers for the audio. Sounds great!
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hmmm

Well, unlike the other scat man song, you actually fill in the parts, that are most important. The song is pretty chill, for the most part.
I didn't like the insturment that did the bi boppa boda bo, part, it was kinda annoying.
The hi hats, suck. They pissed me off, man.
I like the snare and the claps, kinda neat man.
Clearly different that the original, so I gave you some more points for that.
Pretty diverse for a remix.
Clear is kinda a low, because of that damn hi hat. Pissed me off, really XD.
Good job.
Check my music out if you get a bit.
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Okay.

When the guy scats in the song, you should make another insturment to represent his voice. IF you did, it was far too quiet for me to hear it.
This isn't your song, and it's not far too different, so you got 0 for Originality.
I haven't heard things like this, first time I heard the scatman.
Pretty clear, but the kicks, were too quiet and sounded like someone was tapping on the wall, or some shit like that.
Parts could have been filled, but you chose to leave it just be a bass and a kick, so... I don't think you worked extremely hard, if you ask me...
3/5
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Come check my music out, if you get a chance.
I hoped I helped.

kittycat84 responds:

ok. I take your advice, and you did help a bit. Thank You.

Straight.

Now, I haven't made music in a while, but I still got my touch on what's chill, and what's shit. This is neither. It's alright man, but it just, needs some spice.

It sounds too much like the original, and all, so it just doesn't really sound as cool as it could. Give me this flp when I get FL again, I'll show you some stuff that would just make it fucking insane! It would be all like, woah and shit! The transition was weak, you should have used some auto clips on them man.... WEAK!

Be chill, hope your summer is kick ass and shit.

DJ-B responds:

Thank You very much for the review. I did not spend much time on this remix but I have been thinking about making it better.

There is not that many auto clips like you said so i will probly add more

Hope You have a cool summer.

Headache

I don't really know much about DnB, so I'll do my best. I wish the melody was down an octave, it hurt my head. I didn't like the little whistle puff, sounds like a glitch noise in the song, I don't think it help. The beat was catchy. I couldn't really hear the bass, so I can't comment on that, well yeah, turn the bass up. The pad was good.
so-so dude.
4/5
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Neat man.

I really like this tune man. I can just imagine what this sounds like in a car. I can't wait till I get my own car, because this will be playing. I bet the bass sounds amazing on this song.
I don't really have a hefty review, but oh well. Harsh that you got zeroed though.

5/5

Everlasting-Elements.

Envy responds:

haha I'd love to hear this song playing out of a car window, that would be absolutely awesome to hear someone listening to it!

Thanks for the review!

It's been a frickin' minute.

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