Everlasting-Elements's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Final Battle 3.0]

Boss

The song ain't too bad. But your choir sound is too echoey. I think you should make the cutoff a bit sooner, because it's just way to much. Your percussion gets muffled from it, and when the muffle can't muffle shit down, I hear distortion, whcih I don't think should be in classical, but maybe? You just need to get an EQ on some of your insturments, okay?
The melody and beat itself, are pretty fuckin' cool. I'm digging them, they just need some volume and EQ control, and you'd have it all set.
4/5
Everlasting-Elements
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[Spacewalker]

Dynamite.

Alright. Sounds like some space alien shit. Right on. A unique little style. Alright.
So here we are, working into the song. I'm liking that arpy thing as the first melody with that nice hard kick. The double kicks are nice. I can't tell what just came in. Maybe a bass? I kinda don't like it, because I can hardly make out what it is. I think if it was deeper, provided it's your bass, you'd have quite a little sound.
I kinda wish the melody changed a little. Reminds me off a song I made, not posted. I like your little pitch effect. It's an oddy eerie thing, when the pitch comes in, I think you should make your beeps and boops more strategic to create a nice little back beat.
The bass when it's super bassey and loud, sounds kinda weird. I dunno if I like it or not. But I liked your hats, but now they're gone. Sounds like you're letting the ride slow to a stop. Uhp, nope. You brought it back. Semi-flowish, but it could have used another introduction of a second melody, you know? When you do down-builds, I think another melody should be added. Makes it pro.
Overall, the songs is pretty decent.
4/5
Everlasting-Elements.
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Fantum responds:

Thx for the advice, I'll try for some more bassey sounds next time.

[Digital Sunset]

Right on.

I like the intro bass with the filtered beat. It's something I'm a fan of, that's why it's in almost all of my songs. But shit, that synth. It's really powerful. It's kinda funny I picked this song, when I was discussing about how I'm gonna make this year something, with someone. It really added to the dramatic effect, for me. Right on.
I like the beat, and the melody a lot. They flow so well, together.
OH SHIT!!! A fuckin' hip hop like beat. SHEEEEEIT! That's fuckin' dope! I didn't see that shit coming. Oh my god, dude. I don't mean to flip out, but that just really caught me. What a fuckin' genius idea!
It'd be sweet to have some lyrics at that part. Shit, dude. I'm loving it, dude.
Pro as fuck.
Everlasting-Elements
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MarioMan94 responds:

thanks for the review. For the synths, I used an Audjoo Helix vst, but sadly they're no longer open-beta (free). It costs $150, but if you can still find a free beta somewhere it's great to use for melodies.

oh, and one Sytrus for the first bassline beat. =)

[All Aboard the Psytrain!]

Dynamite.

I'm feeling the melody and beat. It's really neat. The occassional ozzy voice is very interesting. I like it. Too bad there aren't other vocals eh. Oh shit!!! Crazy Train guitar gone electronic. Damn. That's really fuckin' nice, dude. I'm really feeling this song, now.
I'm not much of a fan on the screaming "All aboard" though. I'm just not feeling it, for some reason. This has such has a really good beat.
The only ALL ABOARD I liked was at the start and at the end. I thought the one at the end was going to set up for like a crazy synth, but it didn't. =[
It's pretty nice, man.
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
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theta4 responds:

Well, I wanted this to be a psytrance version of Crazy Train, so I decided to sample the original and use the same melodies and stuff. I'm glad you liked it.

[.Lampshade.]

Growing on me.

hmm... Well, The intro was pretty neat. But this melody that comes in, sounds a bit... well, randomly placed. Now, don't get me wrong, it sounds kinda neat, but it's a little too chaotic for me.
It has weird transitions. They're unexpected. Like... chaoz, to contained. Very odd, but I kinda like it. Reading songs is kinda lame. I think 3 hours is not enough.
The song is really short, and all. This has more potential if you added some nice melodies that were like... not intros.
That's what this makes me hear. An intro. It's all set, but what about the actual song? I really hope you tkae some time to 'finish' this, man.
4/5
Everlasting-Elements
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[-=IG=- Happy New Year -=IG=-]

Flow.

Shit. I'm feeling this beat. I'm likin' the laughs, too. I don't like the heavy echo on the voice at like... :17. But wow, these lyrics are the perfect volume compared the music. Wow, man. This is really nicely mastered. Professional sounding.
The lyrics are okay, but I'm not so good at hearing that kind of stuff, so maybe you could pass me off the lyrics if you've got them.
The ending was really sudden, to me, but then again, I'm not looking at the time limit, I'm just writing this review. But now that I see it's only 1:15, I'm kinda disappointed. Maybe you'll come back to this and make a nice remix that's longer, or something. You oughta try a project with war-spawn. Maybe you have, I dunno. I think it'd be neat if you guys combined your styles.
5/5
Everlasting-Elements.
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InGenius responds:

Dawg, Spawn is def on my list. He made the "Storms" track specifically for me to spit a 3 verse track to. Now that the new mic is in, that's at the top of my list of things to finish. Thanks for the review.

Peace

[House-cRAVE-]

First time I listened to the 'house' genre.

Wow... This sounds so eerie. Like, walking down an alley to buy some drugs, or something, and turns out, you're trapped. Wow... I like this.
I could see someone fighting to this song. Like... Wow, I'm digging this.
Your bass sounds marvelous with that lovely beat. It's like an orgasm in my ears/brain. I like the occasion note thing you have going on, too. Adds for dramatic effect.
I'm hoping you make a high peak for this song, I think it's coming. Not sure, though. Sounds like the music is getting louder, but I don't hear anything setting up for a hardcore part. It just set up for a chorus 2. Nothing more.
I'm hoping this gets finished into a finished product, though. It has amazing potential.
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
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[Hard Enough?(demo)]

Pretty neat.

The intro reminds me of a classical composition. I really dig this piano. Has a nice flow with the strings. I could have saw this being mad into a hip hop track, to be honest, man.
I really like the kicks you used. The beats sounded pretty neat. The song sounds really good to me, but I don't really like the hi hats. They could use some work, if you ask me. I just don't like how they're placed so close together, that you can hardly make out the individual notes they make.
The song is pretty basic, and didn't seem to have much of a peak. Sounded like an intro and a few chorus', but no main riff, you know?
4/5
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SessileNomad responds:

the thing with hardstyle(at least alot that i hear), the melodies dont really change much, idk why
i was goingto make a second melody, or a different chorus, but im lazy
i could easily see this becoming hip-hop as well
the hats were really just somthing i put to diffrentiate the differnt parts, i SHOULD use different sounds and different melodies

idk i plan to go back to this when i get hit with another hardstyle-ish riff

thanks for review, and i will review your stuff right now

[hiptohop]

Eh....

Damn, dude. The intro sounds alright, but these drum packs that you're using kinda suck. I dunno. It's actually just a clap and a high hat, I think. But they're really bad. They just don't sound too good to be honest. I dislike that buzz noise, too. I don't even know what the fuck it is... Comes in at 112. It sounds awful. You have to improve on this. There are no peaks in the song, not much transition. The song has potential, no doubt.
3/5
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[Pickin a Miss]

This is pretty neat, man...

The intro is nice and smooth. And so is the entire song. Like, I'm really feeling this song, dude. Only problem, is you have no beat. The song feels like it's just lacking hardcore. If it had that beat, I'd probably orgasm everywhere. But no seriously, beats are important. If you want, I'm sure you could find some neat drum packs in the AF, man. Check 'em out.
The melodies are gorgeous, though man. This sounds downright 8-bit. How slick would this be with some 8-bit drums? It'd sound like some game for the NES. Right on, man.
Shit was pretty good, not gonna lie.
You can hit me back if you want, with a review. =]
5/5

loansindi responds:

I actually have written a nice little drum line for this, I just haven't gotten around to uploading it. It's also gotten longer.

But thanks for the review, I do really love this song, I don't usually write in a major key and this song is a big departure from that. When I get back home I'll be sure to upload the latest version of this.

I'm glad you liked it, and I'll be sure to hit up your stuff later!