Everlasting-Elements's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chromatic]

Starts off slow, decent melodic feel. Getting into a melody, liked the background pause, then beat introduction. I think this main synth could have a better sound, honestly. Seems really basic, to me. But I like the pause and filter. Sounds cool. The variation of beats are great. I think you have some great melodies here, and with more emotion and better synths you could have something really good.
What program(s) are you using?
4/5
Drop me a review if you can
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/707965?updated=1476401687

LavaRift responds:

Thank you very much. I am using FL Studio 12.

[Little boi]

Very cool. Could use a little mastering, but shit... It's dope.
The organ is pretty erie, has a scary movie feel to it, my friend says.
I like it, though.
Drop me a review if you find the time.
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bat-man187 responds:

thank you big homie ! im working n my mixer i been learning on my own man im getting there doe thanks bra

[Lavender Remix]

I thought the beat was pretty cool, but your insturments in themselves, seem a little dry. Try adding some FX to them, just a little. Like the piano would sound nice with some reverb, and I think your snares would, too. That's just me though.
It's fairly simple and nothing too astray from the original.
Good job, though!
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[Serve Love]

Cool piano synth, but... it sounds like the beat comes in a little weird with the piano. Like... the piano should be set up to introduce a beat, if that makes sense?
But the song overall sounds cool. I love that you have vocals on it. That's ballsy, and way creative.
The music and the vocals seem to clash a bit.... like all the insturments and vocals are sent right down the middle, when your insturments should be slightly left or right with vocals down the center, that might help. I could be wrong, though.
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KidDeception responds:

THanks for the review my friend. I appreciate the Honest feedback. We are on the rough draft right now, but we're looking for feedback before we put out the final product for press. So thanks its always good to have outside eyes. we will put in work and see what we can do. You can count on a future review as well. Till then take care.

[TheBleedingTalk]

It's pretty chaotic, and kind of erie. I suppose that wouldn't be a bad thing if used correctly. It's not horrible, but not good either. I like the melodies you created, not bad for a new guy. But it sounds a little off. Maybe they're off notes or something. I always had trouble figuring out what notes worked with what. If you open up pitcher in the master channel, it'll tell you what notes work on a certain scale. Very useful for me, at least.
Transitioning could use work, but shit, you got a song man. And all you can do is keep creating!!!
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[My Name (Oak ReReMix)]

I think this a really neat loop. I'll actually put it on loop for a minute while I review this.
I'm not really sure if I'm right about this... but I feel like you should have some sort of background chords or something to fill the slight emptiness in it or something. I don't know, maybe dubstep doesn't do that.
I like how you did this though, man. I wish I knew how to make dubstep, I'd try to make something similar to this.
Drop me a review if you find the time!
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[Dark Purity]

Well, I don't usually review rock stuff, but hey first for everything, right!?
Anyways, I like the chords you're using in the beggining. And even though you're using slayer, which usually doesn't sound all that good, I think this sounds really sweet. The bells you add in, sound really good. I like how this takes a few different directions. Very creative, if I do say so myself. If this is something you would call a low effort piece, I'd really like to see something that you put all your effort into.
If there was something that I could suggest, would maybe be something like a solo or something. Just to spice it up a bit. I don't know... Even without it, it's fuckin' dope!
Drop me a review if you find the time, please!
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[1 Thessalonians 4:17]

Has a very nice ambient background noise. I quite like the birds actually. The synth seems to play occasional off notes, I'm not really sure if I like it or not, to be honest.. I like the bass part that comes in at :43. I think it's fairly catchy. Especially when you do the goa like drum part. I like the splicing you're doing here. The gross beat is a little weird sometimes, but I'll admit, that's really hard to use. Way to be ballsy and use it though!!!!
Goes through a repeat.
Overall, it's not a bad song, but not super awesome, either. Keep making music man!
And if you could, please come check out my latest work if you get the time!
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[=[O]= Refresh]

You still got it man! Glad to see you're jamming in the studio still.
Like the synths you got going on, especially the chords. Those are a nice touch.
Hopefully you aren't complete with this project though. Definitely has great potential.
5'd

0con responds:

Oh aren't you sweet =P

Unfortunately I only have the demo of 10 and have n way of downloading or paying foor a full version so I can't re-open the project =(

If you can help please let me know on FB or something ;)

[Gym Socks]

Overall I think it sounds pretty cool.
I really really like what you have going starting around 30 seconds. This would get me moving pretty quick at my job, has my head, involuntarily, bobbing. I like the pad that you're transitioning with but the occasional synth you have come in, would sound better if it was a bit more bell like, in my opinion. I don't know why but it just doesn't mix well for me, but I understand the idea and think with tweaking could have worked perfectly.
Back to that cool little riff and a phat bass. Sounds fuckin' dope! Would love to hear something like this in one of the local clubs. I can definitely dance to something like this. I love the gated synth around 320. Makes for a very emotional feel. Love how you have your bases bouncing. I think that is the best part of the whole song!
Good job though man! 5'd for ya!

PERVOK responds:

This is an older track from about a year and a half or two years ago (maybe more, i always lose track of time) but I really appreciate your advice :) I'll keep your suggestions in mind as to which were your favorite parts or what could have been changed for the new tracks I'm working on. Thanks for the review :)