Everlasting-Elements's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJTylo: Prison of Snow]

Nice

I like the song, but I don't really like that hi hat that is playing in every eighth note. I think it is just annoying really and kinda takes me to the hat rather than the beauty of the song.
When the piano comes in, I wish that could have been a bit more dramatic. It just seemed really high and just kinda took me away from the main melody of the song, I wish it could have flown in better, like quieter and maybe longer notes to make it more dramatic.
The crash in the song is kinda...odd sounding. Perhaps modding the crash and putting a different type of effect on it, would make me feel like it fit better. I think a nice echoey crash, would do the job. Just me.
The melodies sounded fine, especially that choir, I think it is, in the background, perhaps a string. It is very good though. Just those minor problems I said above.
5/5
everlasting-Elements

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Realmguys responds:

Everlasting, first of all, thank you for your review. I'm glad I can add you to my network of NG music friends! Your advice is sound. Bottom line, I must improve my drum/percussion. I will have to experiment with a number of solutions, but I have a few directions and ideas to start in. Thanks again. I'll check your stuff out too.
-Ty

[Flow(green)]

Lets be honest!

The way you have this set up is okay, but you need to get some new drum packs, because that hat and snare are driving me insane!
On a good note, I like the glass thing or whatever that you used for the new melody that came in, and the melody itself if overall good, but it just sucks with them shitty packs!
4/5
That vocals part sucks too!
Everlasting-Elements
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Mr-green-apple responds:

i dont get what ur talking about on the snare. thats like the standard dance snare. you may be right but i love a good distorted snare. thx for listening

[Yogosun: Danger Will Come]

Good song

I like the song, no doubt, but if it was meant to be the factory style, this doesn't really get it. The song doesn't seem to have the factory style to me, I dunno about others. Good melodies, this just sounds like dark style techno to me! Good job none the less.

Jiao-Zhang responds:

ha ha, I thought it was goth! But I put it industrial cuase I did it by accident. Thanks for the review.

-yogosun

[special k]

Cool

Pros
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1) I actually like how made the repetivness flow.
2) Not bad beats
3) The voice sounded good with the vocals
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CONS
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1) The voice, the first made the song sketchy for me.
2) The song does get annoying after a minute or 2
3 That intro sucks man!

5/5
Everlasting-Elements

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snayk responds:

Thanks for the awesome review.

I agree that the first voice does sound a little out of place, but when I was making the song I decided to keep it for fun.

I don't get bored with the song, but that's just me. Most people get sick of my repetition, and I don't blame them.

I like the intro :( I like weird sounds and effects, so I kept that present.

Once again, thank you for the great review. I'll check out your music sometime.

[(DJ-B) First Song]

Well

This song needs work! The beat is far too repetitive and stands out too much. Sounds like the insturments have no effects and the the drum kits sound like the original ones that are selected for you in fl!

On the plus side. This is pretty good for your first. On my old account, my first didn't even have a melodyXD.

3/5

Everlasting-Elements

DJ-B responds:

thank you for reviewing my song. I think i can agree with what you said.thanks again.

[Yogosun: Beutiful Sunset]

Good

I liked it man, but like ocon said, that Hi-hat just sucked. And it just made the whole song have a nag effect on it. Other than that, it was very well put together, and I wish I could be as good as you, but I suck, so oh well. Good job dude!

5/5

Everlasting-Elements

Jiao-Zhang responds:

lol. Dont say you suck.. why? becuase it will get people to not listen to you. Just keep practising, you'll get better. Thanks for the review!

-Yogosun

[Yogosun: Kick the bass!]

Awsome

It was awsome man. I didn't like the super long kick intro. That got old, fast. I do however enjoy that thumping bass, is that a fry bass? I like the main melody, but really your only problem was that long intro! Good job bro!

Everlasting-Elements

Jiao-Zhang responds:

lol. well, its trance. get over it =p Thanks.

-Yogosun

[Death To All]

MUTE

You need to mute this or somethung or cut that off because when it rings, it fucks everything up. The beat is really repetetive. The song is okay, and if it did not ring so damn much, I would not mind hearing this.
4/5
Everlasting-Elements

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newskies responds:

Ok, I'll keep that in mind for upcoming tracks!

Anyways thx for the review!

-NewSkies

[An Everlasting Struggle]

I like it man

Real light metal. It is a good thing to hear after listening to OMERTA by LAMB OF GOD. But anyways. the panning effect was pretty good, but the drums sounded off at first, but now that I'm hearing it again, they sound fine. This is a good song, but where the fuck is the kick ass bass!? Come check me out, I make techno, but I'm still a metal head!
5/5

Everlasting-Elements

Xerxes-Sangco responds:

Haha thanks for the 5 and kick ass review! Yea the bass is in there, I just don't want it to overpower the guitars, and because I made this late at night and didn't have headphones, I had to make this with my speaker volume low and couldn't really hear much. Thanks for the feedback!

[-=First Day of Life=-]

good man

I like the song and what the insturments consist of. Although, I did not like the Timpani or what ever you used as the drums when they get kinda loud. I think it was a timpani though. At the end when all the insturments play their last long note, the timpiani sounds awful once again...maybe tune that down or something. Good job none the less.
5/5

Everlasting-Elements

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Zajedx responds:

thanks for taking time to review my work

yup its a timpani hmm your right its a bit loud, but i couldnt change it for some reason i dont know why

anyway i know what i have to do necxt time

thanks alot