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[(DJ-B) Phantom Of The Opera]

Okay

The song was pretty good, but it could have been A LOT BETTER. Your snares were so...boring, really. They need some...pizaz, edit to your taste. The instrument that was used for Catherine, or whatever her name was, was not a good pick in my opinion. I would have chosen a higher like instrument. This one a a deep effect to it, and when it went high, it just didn't have a good sound. The little arp was kinda, too repetitive.
However, you did the song, so you got some major points there. It doesn't sound you missed notes anywhere, which is a good way to be tops, like me, lol, just kidding. The male voice, was good though.
4/5
Everlasting-elements

DJ-B responds:

Sorry I have not responded I am behind on my reviews. Thanks for the review man.

[dark caves]

Pretty cool.

It sounds really good. Good melody, and fx. The only real problem I found, your FX made this loud screech noise, and my head was about to explode. That just didn't help the song at all. That was honestly, the only problem with the song man. Keep making music for us.

Come check me out if you want to as well
5/5
Everlasting-Elements

snayk responds:

Haha, yeah that sound effect was altered to purposely sound like that. I was keeping true to the industrial genre :D

Thanks a lot for the review + vote. Will gladly look through your stuff.

[(DJ-B)A Lonely Place]

Damn

CONS
The song sounds like it a has a heavy kick and bass. With my headphones it distorts the sound and cuts it all out except fuzz. It's very repetitive through the song, and it's too short, I would have liked more variation in this piece.

PROS
The melody does a dramatic feel on my emotions and makes me feel confused about sadness. The beat sounds pretty solid except your hi hat. It seems so flimsy. You should make it on like, C4 or something, because it sounds so high, and it just doesn't feel like a mix to me with your deep beat. I like the violin or whatever, it sounds nice the the rimshot snare. I think that's what that is. It has a good ending, too.

Everlasting-Elements
Go review OCON

DJ-B responds:

Thank You for the review man. The distotion was just from crappy mastering. I plan to fix that in a remix. Thanks again.

[> ! Gritty Skiez !<]

The...well

This song just seems all over the place. The song has beats, which is cool, but your drum loop in the beggining started then stopped, then started again and that just doesn't sounds very good at all. The transition, changing, doesn't sound very good either. It got my head moving towards the end. It's not a bad song, it's just not good.
3/5
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BritZombie responds:

Yeah, I could've improved on that one. I'll check out your stuff soon.

Cheera

[Fahrenheit]

Very cool my friend!

I want this song to be tops. It beats Farenheit entirely! I with the Hi-Hats were an octave down. I think that would suit the more 'evil' on this. Too be honest, I can't really find anything else wrong with this song. Melodies are great man!
5/5
Everlasting-Elements

Envy responds:

"It beats Farenheit entirely!" You mean celsius?
I'm the only one who liked celsius more i guess ^.^ I like happier songs more hi hats an octive down? Thats crazy talkin'! But i suppose it could have worked, cept i donno if theyd flow as well together.

[Celcius]

CFL?

Kinda sounds like Crying for Love, doesn't it?
I really like your melodies here man. They have a nice sound to them and this sounds very happy hardcore to me!
That arp is very fitting with this song and really I don't have any problems with this song.
The Hi-hats are annoying to me though. That's really all that bugs me.
Good job
5/5
Everlasting-Elements

Envy responds:

I LOVE THAT ARP! I was going for a happy hardcore feel, but i just LOVE that melody. I feel that this song and farenheit made a great addition to my page... And it didnt hurt getting some dls for my older songs from these also XD (Go platinum ninjitsu, GO!)

[Cleaning Season[DS]]

Not too bad

The song sounds very well made. The melody is good. The beat is half-ways decent. And it just sounds good in particular. I, however, do not like your high hats, at all! They don't fit your hard beat. So really, you just need to change those hats, and you are good to go man!
5/5
Everlasting-Elements

DJ-STump responds:

kk sweet srry im not a good dnb kinda guy ill try to work on it tho
thx for the review tho

[Vampires dream]

Very cool

I think the melody sounds very good and sounds nice with the arp thing in the back. The lyrics sound fairly fitting with the song. But I was looking for a more deep, rough sound to this song. I think that would better suit the song with the lyrics. That is really the main problem. It's very good.
Everlasting-Elements

5/5

DistortionResonance responds:

Thanks for the review man, and of course, the helpful tips :)

[Yogosun: Melodic Sunrise]

Rev claps?

The melody sounds really good dude. The beat sounds good, but the reversed claps, i think, sound like puke. It sounds offbeat for the song or just completely out of place, and you can notice it. In some spots, it sounds very good though.
The song sounds very full and filled in. I like how it works up and all and really seems like there is no major problem.
Wait, now I found one. You have a fuzzing sound in the song, and it just completely sucks. It ruins the song.

Everlasting-Elements

Jiao-Zhang responds:

Sorry about that. Its supposed to be wind =( but it doesnt I guess. Thanks!

~Yogosun

[Paranorma [Trance Remix] Fixed]

Great

I like this song dude, but that synth at the beggining had a sick sound, and then when the bass came in, it sounded a lot better. all in the headphones my man!
I like the kick rolls and then the section where it got quiet, i recognize that, but...it sounded different, which is damn cool!
The intro like spin/ scrathch thing, was really cool and added awsome zest to the song man. made it hardcore to me and so did the vox. Sounded very intune with the song man.
5/5
Everlasting-Elements

k-m-g responds:

Thanks man helpful reviews are always nice. ;)