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[Sonic Advance 2 - Sky Canyon]

My new friend =)

My Audio Forum friend, eh!?
I thought that it started off real slow, but I'm not so familiar with the tune, so, maybe it's supposed to be like that.
The crashes got... sketchy when you placed them so close together. I think you needed to fine tune them.
It was a good song. I know I've played this level before, I just don't remember it. I lost the game. Knuckles was sweet, though.

5/5
Everlasting-Elements
Come review me sometime.

PaulyBFromDa303 responds:

Yeah Knux was pretty kick-ass, I think he was the best in the game.

Yeah, now that we're peeps, I'll shoot by a review, so you better read it XD

[Radames-Why(Dajova Remix)]

Neat.

I'm liking this intro. The beat is just catchy.
WOW, I tell you, I didn't see that coming. I didn't ever expect to see vocals.
hmm... split into bit...that, I don't like.
Not much to say man...it's just a preview, so I don't know what to say.
Did you do these vocals, or just find them?

Everlasting-Elements
4/5
Come review me.

Dr-Dajova responds:

The split is because i dont want this track to be stolen, since its undergoing a remixcontest on vipzone...

and no, i did not make these vocals, since it says "radames" at the start, witch is the original author... And i have the full version already done (this is clipped from it), but i wont release it until the contest is over, simple as that :)

Well, glad ya like it either way, i'll keep them coming ;)

[Final Fantasy 7 - Jenova Abs]

Diversity

I thought the intro lasted a little too long. I think you should have put your own hardcore spices in there, if you wanted to make it that fucking long.
I don't like your insturment choice. I think there is one called 'Rave Lead' or something like that. I'll tell you what, I don't like it. It doesn't sound good in the song one bit, and that Piano is pissing me off. It's way too repetitive. I'm glad I don't play FF because I'm sure that song would piss me off.
You just need to spice up the songs you make man. It's not bad, trust me, I've reviewed worse, but it could be a lot better.
Everlasting-Elements
3/5 Average.
Come review me sometime. I'm going to make a VG remix. Maybe it could help you...

Lone-X responds:

Well the song is intended for people who did play FF7 man. U should hear the original one and compare.

[(DJ-B) DotA REMIX (FIXED)]

Mastering much?

It doesn't have very nice quality. I hear the dudes vocals, and I can understand them, it's just...they're all weird sounding. Also, you should have left the fade out, out. That way, the song could just loop. You seem to have some tallent now man. If you need help with some stuff, hit me up, and I'll do what I can.
I just got FL again, and I work on it when I stay at my sisters house. Soon, I'm getting my own PC just for music, so, I'll be working very hard.
I just now noticed you stole my signature move. The tempo drop, eh?
Everlasting-Elements

DJ-B responds:

Thanks for the review man. If I need some help I'll talk to you. thanks for the review

[(DJ-B) End of the World Battle]

Hm. Let me see

If I recall, the original was quite a classical song. In this one, you made it a techno, perhaps a bit ambient. It lost a lot of touches from the original. By that, I mean, it didn't have an impact of well...a large impact. In end of the world, that was like the final world, which is quite big. The song was as big as it should be.
The little.... screechy thing is what really ruined it, to be honest. I wish you would have chose better sounds too. I think that is the main problem with the song.
Everlasting-Elements

DJ-B responds:

Thanks for the review man.

[Im a Scatman![kittycat84]]

Okay.

When the guy scats in the song, you should make another insturment to represent his voice. IF you did, it was far too quiet for me to hear it.
This isn't your song, and it's not far too different, so you got 0 for Originality.
I haven't heard things like this, first time I heard the scatman.
Pretty clear, but the kicks, were too quiet and sounded like someone was tapping on the wall, or some shit like that.
Parts could have been filled, but you chose to leave it just be a bass and a kick, so... I don't think you worked extremely hard, if you ask me...
3/5
Everlasting-Elements
Come check my music out, if you get a chance.
I hoped I helped.

kittycat84 responds:

ok. I take your advice, and you did help a bit. Thank You.

[(DJ-B) POPCORN REMIX #1]

Straight.

Now, I haven't made music in a while, but I still got my touch on what's chill, and what's shit. This is neither. It's alright man, but it just, needs some spice.

It sounds too much like the original, and all, so it just doesn't really sound as cool as it could. Give me this flp when I get FL again, I'll show you some stuff that would just make it fucking insane! It would be all like, woah and shit! The transition was weak, you should have used some auto clips on them man.... WEAK!

Be chill, hope your summer is kick ass and shit.

DJ-B responds:

Thank You very much for the review. I did not spend much time on this remix but I have been thinking about making it better.

There is not that many auto clips like you said so i will probly add more

Hope You have a cool summer.

[~EnV~Ninjitsu 2]

Neat man.

I really like this tune man. I can just imagine what this sounds like in a car. I can't wait till I get my own car, because this will be playing. I bet the bass sounds amazing on this song.
I don't really have a hefty review, but oh well. Harsh that you got zeroed though.

5/5

Everlasting-Elements.

Envy responds:

haha I'd love to hear this song playing out of a car window, that would be absolutely awesome to hear someone listening to it!

Thanks for the review!

[Death By Confusion]

Catchy.

Originality sounded pretty good. Sounded like a nice touch of the oriental sounds, really.
It's very diverse. I don't hear to much techno like this man. I usually hear basic things.
Your beat was okay, but quickly got annoying and just kinda made me mad, to the point where I couldn't focus on your melody.
Your reverse crash was a bit messed up, and it's noticable if you listen carefully. It's off by about a fourth of a measure.
Not really that much to it man...
It's alright I guess.
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
Come check me out.

XMalick responds:

Thanks for listening. I really apologize for the years late response. haha.

[ley awake]

Neat

Hey man, whats up!?
Anyways, it sounds pretty cool. The intro sounds good and all. Just flows pretty nice, but the guitar doesn't sound so hot in this peice. I think maybe another arp would better suit this song. It's really good actually.

5/5
Everlasting-Elements

Can you check out my new song?
Do you still go to the sk8 crew? I thought I saw you in there, a while back.

zerofalse responds:

heyy thanks for the review
i knew that the guitar might be one of the downfalls in the song.but thanks for letting me know. i guess techno with guitar riffs doesnt so good lol. ill check out some of your stuff too no prob i use to talk in the sk8 crew forums, but not anymore for some reason. i still skate alot though
thx for your review