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Everlasting-Elements

Age/Gender: 16, Male
Location: Sylvania, Ohio
Job: Shit for my mom.

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Score: 9
=[O]= Dry (Instrumental)

"Hmm... smooth."

date: August 17, 2008

Reminds me of alien shit. The little piano or whatever that is, reminds me of the x-files theme. I like it man. I wouldn't mind hearing some lyrics to go with this, dude.
Pros
-Smooth beat. Flows so good.
-Good insturment choices
-Good use of your FX

Cons
-Extremely repetitve. I understand it's hip hop and all, but without lyrics, it kinda gets old.

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Score: 8
(DJ-B) Decent FINAL

"Smooth"

date: August 17, 2008

Wow... didn't see this coming, you know?
I like the intro. It's very chill. I don't like your choice of snare, though. I like the digi thing or whatever that is. Sounds nice for a backup lead. That's a nice arp. I think your beat should have a little more power in it, though. Make them louder, or add more sounds to increase the force.
Nice little break down measure too. I like that pad, it's used nice. You did really well with your automation clips, man. The song is nice.
Pros
-Nice choice of insturments
-One of the smoothest songs I've heard from you
-Good song in general nice use of your resources.

Cons
-The beat lacks power, and the beat is the spine, so the song has lost quite a bit of movement.
-The song is far too short.
-The ending FX is shit. Remove it completely.

August 19, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review man!!!! I know the ending was a little rough but I ran out of ideas so I just said whatever and posted it.

DJ-B

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Score: 9
'08 Trance Demo

"Trance... not my forte."

submission: '08 Trance Demo
date: August 16, 2008

That sample sucks, lol... I like the intro. The cymbal sounds nice and I like that bass. That little arp or whatever sounds nice, but sometimes it makes my ears ring and I have it on about half volume right now. I really like the tune, though.
Your percussion is very unique. I haven't heard things like that before.
The songs sounds amazing when you use the drums around 120. Sounds extremely chill and relaxing, man.
You already know what you need to improve on, I think...
5/5
Come review me, if you want.

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Score: 8
Tranq

"Too short already."

submission: Tranq
date: August 16, 2008

This intro really sucks.... It's not keeping in there at all. This isn't even DnB, dude. I seriously don't know how to improve on it. For one, this is like an experimental song to me, which I find cool. It's not a bad song, just, if you're going for DnB, you should get a zero from me right now. Just edit and change the genre, okay?
Come review me, will ya?

August 16, 2008

Author's Response:

thanks for the review, I changed the genre and I dont think it really fits anywhere well, I'm probably going to go back and change it later.

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Score: 7
*tHe ViRuS*

"So let me restart this song..."

submission: *tHe ViRuS*
date: August 16, 2008

Hmm... a nice intro. No beat just the tune, sounds nice. Now I think I hear a soft kick, followed by the very quiet break down kick.
The snare sounds pretty cool.. I'm not a fan of that hat. I think you have the right idea about it, just not the right choice in sound.
That acidic loop sounds fairly nice with the song.
The song is smooth, but doesn't feel like it's going anywhere. It has a lot of potential, in my opinion, but nothing that amazes me out of the ordinary, you know? The song itself is cool and all, but the kick needs to be louder and you need more of a climax somewhere in your song, you know?
I like the outro. Sounds like someone is dizzy, but that lame FX of an explosion or whatever was pretty lame.
4/5
review me back, bro.

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Score: 9
Rising Revolt (WIP)

"Returning the favorite"

date: January 6, 2008

I'm not much of a trance person, so, I dunno.
I don't normally like Trance, because I dunno how to make it and I'm mostly jealous of those who can. I really wanna make GOA someday.
Anyways, I like the beat for the song and the synths are pretty smooth as well. Probably the only the I don't like are them vox cuz they just sound really dumb.
It's a cool song, I like the little arp before the whole stupid vox thing, though.
Thanks for reviewing my song, here is the favor returned.

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Score: 10
=[O]= Hydro [GOA]

"Hey bitch =]"

submission: =[O]= Hydro [GOA]
date: January 6, 2008

I miss you man! I haven't talked to you in forever, but I guess your phone is disconnected, huh?
Anyways, I really like the bass, it sounds really cool to me, man. I always wanted to try goa, I dunno if you ever remember me talking about doing, but I guess you can show me how to do it someday, huh?
No major problems, but the arp gets annoying after the 50th time hearing it =]

January 10, 2008

Author's Response:

Hey man sorry I haven't talked to you in a while bro, my phone is disconnected right now though so yeah =(

Anyway thanks for the review man! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked the song! I really liked the arp a lot because of all the depth it put into the song and it just sounded awesome because it kinda fades in with the rest of the music to the point that it is barely noticeable. Idk, I like it =)

Take it easy dude.

Peace,
Alyk O'Connor

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Score: 9
=[O]= Demolish

"It's cool"

submission: =[O]= Demolish
date: November 24, 2007

I'm pretty tired right now, but I'm really happy, cuz... shit is all the sudden going good. Not like when I was texting you earlier.

I like them kicks or whatever that make the kinda grinding noise. It fades speaker to speaker, that's sweet and giving my trippy ear infection an acid feel.
I wanna know where you found all of these too >=[ I've not heard any off this shit in FL you bastard!

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Score: 8
(DJ-B) Medieval Times DEMO

"Medieval?"

date: October 10, 2007

Well, at first I was all like, YO HO HO man. Thought it was a pirate tune =] Guess not
IT's not very medieval if you ask me, but hey, it's what you think.
Needs some sound proof, and possibly, a longer span needs to be in here, too.
It's all good man.

October 11, 2007

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review man it only took you like 5 days after i asked you to. I know it need to be longer and some compression and EQing that is why it is a DEMO!!!!

Thanks Again

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Score: 9
==(Goodnight)==

"Aww"

submission: ==(Goodnight)==
date: September 16, 2007

All chill and shit. I don't really know you, but hell, usually you seem crazy in them forums. This is all like, lovey and shit, you know.
I like this chill thing, and I'm pretty envious of this. I wish I could make something like this, but I just can't do that style of shit. Not me, I guess.
I think you use Reason, too, so maybe that's another reason why I can't make music like this, I dunno.
It's cool though man, no problems really.

September 16, 2007

Author's Response:

Absolutely true that I act kinda different in the forums and the portal (reviews, review responses, userpages n shit) but I'm definatively not crazy anymore- that was in 06 and early 07- I e-matured right

Sure I use Reason- I think you can do the same chill stuff in FL, but I think that would a more electronica inspired kind of tune, wouldn't it- FL seems to be aimed more at electronica and new age music. But I don't know, I almost never use it at all do I'm not one to talk

Thanks for the yummy review!

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