Everlasting-Elements's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chromatic]

Starts off slow, decent melodic feel. Getting into a melody, liked the background pause, then beat introduction. I think this main synth could have a better sound, honestly. Seems really basic, to me. But I like the pause and filter. Sounds cool. The variation of beats are great. I think you have some great melodies here, and with more emotion and better synths you could have something really good.
What program(s) are you using?
4/5
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LavaRift responds:

Thank you very much. I am using FL Studio 12.

[Little boi]

Very cool. Could use a little mastering, but shit... It's dope.
The organ is pretty erie, has a scary movie feel to it, my friend says.
I like it, though.
Drop me a review if you find the time.
E-E

bat-man187 responds:

thank you big homie ! im working n my mixer i been learning on my own man im getting there doe thanks bra

[Serve Love]

Cool piano synth, but... it sounds like the beat comes in a little weird with the piano. Like... the piano should be set up to introduce a beat, if that makes sense?
But the song overall sounds cool. I love that you have vocals on it. That's ballsy, and way creative.
The music and the vocals seem to clash a bit.... like all the insturments and vocals are sent right down the middle, when your insturments should be slightly left or right with vocals down the center, that might help. I could be wrong, though.
E-E
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KidDeception responds:

THanks for the review my friend. I appreciate the Honest feedback. We are on the rough draft right now, but we're looking for feedback before we put out the final product for press. So thanks its always good to have outside eyes. we will put in work and see what we can do. You can count on a future review as well. Till then take care.

[=[O]= Refresh]

You still got it man! Glad to see you're jamming in the studio still.
Like the synths you got going on, especially the chords. Those are a nice touch.
Hopefully you aren't complete with this project though. Definitely has great potential.
5'd

0con responds:

Oh aren't you sweet =P

Unfortunately I only have the demo of 10 and have n way of downloading or paying foor a full version so I can't re-open the project =(

If you can help please let me know on FB or something ;)

[Gym Socks]

Overall I think it sounds pretty cool.
I really really like what you have going starting around 30 seconds. This would get me moving pretty quick at my job, has my head, involuntarily, bobbing. I like the pad that you're transitioning with but the occasional synth you have come in, would sound better if it was a bit more bell like, in my opinion. I don't know why but it just doesn't mix well for me, but I understand the idea and think with tweaking could have worked perfectly.
Back to that cool little riff and a phat bass. Sounds fuckin' dope! Would love to hear something like this in one of the local clubs. I can definitely dance to something like this. I love the gated synth around 320. Makes for a very emotional feel. Love how you have your bases bouncing. I think that is the best part of the whole song!
Good job though man! 5'd for ya!

PERVOK responds:

This is an older track from about a year and a half or two years ago (maybe more, i always lose track of time) but I really appreciate your advice :) I'll keep your suggestions in mind as to which were your favorite parts or what could have been changed for the new tracks I'm working on. Thanks for the review :)

[=[O]= Lemons [NG Cut]]

Pretty cool man. Seems like you've kept a similar style all these years man. That happy sound. Glad to see you still produce and everything though, man.
Pretty basic in terms of your talent, I'd say. Maybe you're just getting back into the swing of things?
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0con responds:

Yeah trying to re-learn FL haha

I'll get it back eventually ;)

[When Clouds Fade]

Nice melody.

Hey what's up, man?
I really like the background melodies. Really ambient and relaxing. Seems like they wouldn't fit in a drum and bass song, but that exact contradiction flows well, if you ask me.
the beat sounds really solid. But the melodies are what i really like. the only thing i'd say it lacks is that the music is so relaxing, that it stops this song from being really powerful and bumping, like most songs in this genre do.
mad props for going outside of the box.
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
check out some of my work, sometime!

Waidmann responds:

Yeah...i see where youre going...thanks for the review bro..

But see im an ambient producer...so my main goal was to create something upbeat and relaxing. This was the result.

[ICE - DJ RED]

A lot of shit to learn, man. =[

This sounds pretty good man. I like your bass a lot. I bet you'd be good at dubstep if you can make something like this.
Anyways, your insturments sound good together. At first I didn't like your bongos, but they sound good. I don't like when it's just bongos and a pad though. That sounds kinda empty and plain. But I do like that beep you got goin' on. It's sounds nice with your briliant beat.
Not bad at all
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
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DJ-Blind responds:

Thanks man will do! Idk why it gets rated so low lol, 1.72/5, but I just started learning about decibels, compression, filtering ect. I got so much to fucking learn. I'm hoping by the time I'm done being amazing at making music that I'll be able to make something along the lines of what teddygram makes.

[Technical [Complete]]

Hai

Sounds pretty good man. I like your snare and stuff, but where is the beat? I can't hear it and I think you should definately have a nice kick to keep this pumping. Your hat is a little bit annoying, I'll say. But you picked really good synths and have nice melodies goin' on. Oh, I hear the kick now. I think you should try layering your kicks, cuz it was hard to hear until about 150 into the song.
You should get some EQUO down on your instruments though. They're kinda loud. This kinda reminds me of a paragon song.
It's not too bad, man.
4/5
Everlasting-Elements
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InariPlex responds:

hey :D thanks for the review. and hmm..i see what you mean. i could use a lot more kick. I layered two but that really wasn't enough xD; And that hat does get annoying, doesn't it? urg...I'll have to find a better one lol.

It wouldn't surprise me if it sounded like a Paragon song. Her(?) pieces are the only things I'll listen to in this genre xD;

[((TMP)) I'm Goin' OFF]

5.00 / 5.00 (+ 5.00)

I'm not a hip hop producer, but I'll give a review for ya. =]
Starts off alright, not much going on. I kinda like music for it, but I'm thinking it might be like a love hip hop thing? I dunno. I ususally listen to harder stuff, like three six. But this is pretty well put together. I think it'd be way better with some lyrics? Try doing that sometime man.
Doesn't sound bad at all, just not my cup of tea.
5/5
Everlasting-Elements
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DatKidFromTDot responds:

Thanks,
and i'll definitely review your stuff soon =)